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Norbert Kovacs's avatar

[GENIUS, 6]

Key stuck, she moved the door.

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Bill Ferguson 🇨🇦's avatar

A Story Stack

METHOD 3: The Separation Method

A Cool Greeting (6 words)

Ice flowed through the slammed door.

Hostage Taking (25 words)

The transom opened slowly and sent a letter flying out.

“Help! Door is possessed. Being held hostage. Feed a thousand letters through the mail slot.”

Maybe A Secret Word? (50 words)

Try as I might, I could not remember how to gain access through the door. Was it the knocker? The spy camera? The blackspot at the top of the door? I shook my head.

“What kind of spy am I,” I wondered silently, “if I can’t remember a secret code?”

The Lions Heads (100 words)

“Shhh. My parents are home. What are you doing here?” she asked, closing the door behind her.

“I came by to ask you on a date.”

“That is so sweet. You should have waited until class tomorrow.”

“I couldn’t wait.”

“It’s risky. My parents don’t approve of vampires.”

He looked glum. “It was a “get to know you better date.” he said, emphasizing with bracket fingers.

“I think I will risk it,” she whispered.

The Lion’s Heads on the door both opened, shooting streams of holy garlic water.

“Got him!” a voice yelled loudly

“Tomorrow,” she said, closing the door.

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Bill Ferguson 🇨🇦's avatar

A Story Stack

The Addition Method

Step 1: A 6-word story.

The face frowned as I approached.

Step 2: Copy/paste that 6-word story and ADD 19 words to it. Creating a 25-word story.

The face frowned as I approached.

“Not you again,” it commented laconicly. “ “If you keep showing up, he is going to bar you for good.”

Step 3: Copy/paste that 25-word story and ADD 25 words to it. Creating a 50-word story.

The face frowned as I approached.

“Not you again,” it commented laconicly. “ “If you keep showing up he is going to bar you for good.”

“Of course he wouldn’t,” I replied coolly as I pushed the envelope through its mouth slot. “He would not find out about the state secrets.”

Step 4: Copy/paste that 50-word story and ADD 50 words to it. Creating a 100-word story.

Someone’s Listening (100 words)

The face frowned as I approached.

“Not you again,” it commented laconicly. “If you keep showing up he is going to bar you for good.”

“Of course he is,” I replied coolly as I pushed the envelope through its mouth slot. “He would not find out about the state secrets.”

The door swung open. The Prime Minister was standing there.

“State secrets,” he said as he looked around. “Don’t say that too loudly. Listening ears and all that.”

I regarded him coolly. “Do they all,” I asked, waving my arms at other doors, “have talking doors?”

“No. Plants that listen.”

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J. Kyle Turner's avatar

[Deadbolt, 6]

"Honey?"

"Yeah?"

"Why's the door unlo--"

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

BEHIND A CLOSED DOOR [ 50 words]

I’m invisible now, but I don’t mind.

Everything I value is here

in this one little room —

my books and music,

my pen and paper,

my memories.

I move through these elder years with care,

taking time for quiet review

of my one perfect life,

on this one perfect planet.

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

(Knockers scene 6)

Lion cctv eyes CU knocking growling.

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